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. . . at least I think that's her name <.< >.> I can't remember, but I really enjoyed drawing her too, I guess once I got the hang of it, Figure drawings were a blast for me. ^^ At least if I had my music, cuz otherwise it was my teacher's country music *gags, chokes, and dies*.
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 I gotta say Vani, the way you've improved over thee past year is truly amazing! Your anatomy skills are a lot better and your shading's better as well! Wonder how good you'll be next year
-- I'm a mystery wrapped in an enigma wrapped in an awesome rack!  Ohhhhh the country music.... don't miss that at all
 -- Check out my store at [link] You'll find things from my gallery in there. As Above, So below The more you do it, the more you can do it, regardless of what it is.  Nicely detailed and stylized. I really like the figure work and pose. Very good highlights.
-- "A paranoid is someone who knows a little of what's going on"- William S. Burroughs *TheExquisiteCorpse Me too! I've worked really hard and I'm so grateful for your support the whole time.
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-- I'm a mystery wrapped in an enigma wrapped in an awesome rack! You're welcome
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I would like to see more done though. I mean adding more layers, like making the dark even darker, and th lights even lighter. Though that may be just because how you put it onto your computer.
I also see some proportional issues with the head. It looks to me as if the right side of the head is higher than the left. (Noticeable with the hair, not the actual face). Also the lips look a bit funky. On the left side, it just doesn't look natural.
I would also like to see if you could maybe ground the image so it doesn't look like she is floating. I think it would give the image more of a grounded feeling, more complete.
Its a great picture, I commend you on your ability with charcoal, and being able to get the fabrics of the cloths to look authentic.
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